Assignment 17A - Elevator Pitch No 2
A lot of the Feedback I received noted that it seemed like I was giving a speech as opposed to an Elevator Pitch, so I tried to tailor my newer pitch to be more "Sales"-y. I also received feedback that the anecdote in the beginning was good but too long so I trimmed it down slightly. I also updated my pricing spectrum to reflect the actual pricing I decided on.
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