Alexandra, I really like how you started with a story, but you would have to adapt your pitch for if you were literally in an elevator. You also used a very powerful statistic that made sense to the listener. I like this idea because I think it would be easily implementable in restaurants where tablets are already in use.
Hi Alexandra, I enjoyed how anecdotal you were in your pitch to somewhat grab or hook your audience, but I'm not sure if this is the criteria for an elevator pitch. Still very hooking and intriguing, I feel as if you really relate to your potential audience. Very good that you also ask for feedback at the end, taking into account the interests of your viewers. Keep up the great work!
Alexandra,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you started with a story, but you would have to adapt your pitch for if you were literally in an elevator. You also used a very powerful statistic that made sense to the listener. I like this idea because I think it would be easily implementable in restaurants where tablets are already in use.
Hi Alexandra, I enjoyed how anecdotal you were in your pitch to somewhat grab or hook your audience, but I'm not sure if this is the criteria for an elevator pitch. Still very hooking and intriguing, I feel as if you really relate to your potential audience. Very good that you also ask for feedback at the end, taking into account the interests of your viewers. Keep up the great work!
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